is there a place here for…

Hi @nkwebdesign

I think I want to focus on the check out page

If I understand you correctly, you want to add a feedback area/section on your Checkout page, is that correct?

If yes, you can customize the checkout fields using actions and filters and this codex documentation will walk you through:

https://woocommerce.com/document/tutorial-customising-checkout-fields-using-actions-and-filters/#adding-a-custom-special-field

Here’s the sample output:

Image Link: https://woocommerce.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/WooCommerce-Codex-Checkout-Field-Hook.png

also tax and free shipping seem to be wrong.
people not from local can click “local pick up” I haven’t figure out how to fix that.

I believe that you already created another forum thread related to your inquiry here:

https://wordpress.org/support/topic/local-pick-up-not-showing/

Hello @nkwebdesign,

I’m glad we were able to help! If you have a few minutes, we’d love it if you could leave us a review: https://wordpress.org/support/plugin/woocommerce/reviews/

Cheers!