Feedback request (gulp)

  • newbiewon

    (@newbiewon)


    16 years, 6 months ago

    Hi everyone,

    Just published the site last week and need expert opinions. Doing this on my own finally, so I intended a simple, direct site, but one that is engaging enough to warrant interest. I know the blog is pretty sorry but I still lack the know-how to improve. Do I need Pro version? Or a pro to help? All constructive criticism is gratefully received.

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  • stylepeterson

    (@stylepeterson)

    16 years, 6 months ago

    Er, (gulp) ahem, cough . . . where is the link to the website?

    Thread Starter newbiewon

    (@newbiewon)

    16 years, 6 months ago

    My apologies.

    Thread Starter newbiewon

    (@newbiewon)

    16 years, 6 months ago

    I thought so. I DID put it in — twice now. Here it is sans link: http://www.anti-coach.com

    dlcurtis

    (@dlcurtis)

    16 years, 6 months ago

    Newbiewon,

    I have a couple of suggestions.

    I don’t think the layout of the site is the most important thing. When you are trying to sell your services you really need to hit the emotional appeal. That comes through to a degree in your site, but I think it could be strengthened.

    Also, your testimonials list only initials, not names. Names of real people that can be contacted would be much more powerful.

    Good luck

    chartinael

    (@chartinael)

    16 years, 6 months ago

    I am not big on those type companies and would rather hide my involvement instead of using it as a reference, however, my main question is, why is the blog seperate?

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