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The Restless Feet: A Malaysian Girl Blogging About Travel, Food And Culture (5 posts)

  1. nadiakamal
    Member
    Posted 6 years ago #

    Hello all!

    I'm Nadia Ahmad Kamal from Malaysia. I've created a website on travel, food, and culture. Please find the link below and tell me what you think. I welcome all kinds of feedback to make it better.

    http://www.therestlessfeet.com/

    If you like what you read, feel free to subscribe! :D

  2. elliesword
    Member
    Posted 6 years ago #

    Your site didn't load for me.

  3. nadiakamal
    Member
    Posted 6 years ago #

  4. edwait
    Member
    Posted 6 years ago #

    Nadia. I'm brand new here and to WP myself but I'll give you my thoughts on something. This will probably sound nit-picky but if your target audiance is Americans and if you're trying to make the food look and sound appealing you may want to verifiy you have a "palatable" caption to your photographs. The picture of the "grilled lamb leg" does not sound good at all, to me anyway. We Americans are accustomed to "grilled leg of lamb". Again, I know this is really a minor detail and nit-picky as I said but this post is 100% an attempt to help. Maybe you have a source that can help with wording but then maybe America is not your target audiance. I just don't know.

  5. nadiakamal
    Member
    Posted 6 years ago #

    Hello edwait!

    Thank you so much for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I agree with you about "grilled leg of lamb". I was just copying what was written on the restaurant's menu. Grilled Lamb Leg. :D

    I strive to improve my writing through my blog, and your comment helps a lot.

    Thanks again.

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