My newest wordpress site (3 posts)

  1. rachelanderson
    Posted 3 years ago #

    Hello my name is Rachel Anderson and this is my new site Online Bible . tell me your comments- it is useful for me!



  2. UnnumberedT
    Posted 3 years ago #

    ) The title of the page is inaccurate. When I first looked at the site, my first feeling was one of surprise, because the content on the site didn't match the title. You're not advertising an "Online Bible" but an "Online Bible Dictionary".

    ) I suggest you get a more custom/appropriate web address. 'customonlinefree' is so broad that it is meaningless.

    ) Is your site powered by WordPress? If so, it is bad form to remove the "Powered by WordPress" note from the footer.

    ) The writing is awkward, sometimes so awkward that I couldn't understand your meaning. If I was a random internet user, the nature of the writing would make me worry that this was a scam. Was the text, perhaps, written by a nonnative English speaker? Either way, I suggest you find an editor, someone who is a native English speaker, to fix some of the wording problems.

    )Overall, I'm not sure what's going on with the site. What do you want out of it? Why are you doing this? Figure out what you want, then make the site serve that purpose.

  3. pbadmin
    Posted 3 years ago #

    First things that come to mind are; to tidy the site up, mainly the banners at the top, just 1 logo and a baner to the right is fine. And use a bigger black, arial font to improve readability of posts.

    All the best!

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