Interested in site feedback (5 posts)

  1. simonPHT
    Posted 1 year ago #

    Hi all.
    First time poster, long time lurker…
    This is one of the sites I am working on.
    It is for a travel consultancy in South Australia, and this is their Luxury travel brand. No prices, just a call to action on each product, and categories showing luxury products from around the world. I have attempted to keep everything to a particular standard (LOL although as of this post date there is a vibrant yellow and black ad banner on there!).
    I am still working on the responsive design.
    Based on a child theme of Twenty Eleven.

    Oh, any feedback welcome. Thanx.

  2. Andrew
    Nuh uh moderator
    Posted 1 year ago #

    You're not actually using a Child Theme because is not set up properly.

    The design does not shout out luxury for me, possibly because of the wallpaper but mainly because it looks a lot like a standard blog site.

    What about trying something with more use of imagery? I played around a bit and came up with this http://awesomescreenshot.com/0751gz10dd .

  3. Andrew
    Nuh uh moderator
    Posted 1 year ago #

    See this article on how to create a Child Theme: http://codex.wordpress.org/Child_Themes .

  4. Andrew
    Nuh uh moderator
    Posted 1 year ago #

    You also may want to use the word, "travel" less, e.g your first paragraph on the home page says it 6 times;

    Our dedication to luxury travel has provided us with ‘invitation only’ inclusion in the Virtuoso network. This world wide travel organisation is of the highest standard travel agencies and the finest travel providers. It is their exclusive resources to reach premier destinations and unreachable travel experiences that offer you the greatest access for unbelievable travel.

  5. simonPHT
    Posted 1 year ago #

    Thanks Andrew
    I take your point about the child theme, I'll revisit that.

    And thanks for your screenshot. I'm working within established brand parameters, so one step at a time ;-)

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