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  • This copy seems really dodgy like you’re trying to cram as many instances of the word ‘electrician’ in as possible. That’s old-school dodgy SEO and I don’t think google is impressed by that anymore. I don’t think it was written by a native english speaker, phrases like ‘the Electrician Salary’ aren’t used by native speakers. Also the first para of copy is just waffling and will turn people off straight away. ‘Electrical pages’ (with a typo) is just weird. I really recommend you get someone with better digital copy skills because this copy is not an asset and is far too long.

    There’s some odd wrapping of text on the homepage, the text wraps round empty space. Also I think there’s far too much copy on the homepage. The different types of electrician could be on a different page to prevent so much scrolling.

    I totally agree with you. I am glad I posted in here. I am going to make the changes you suggested. Thanks for your input!

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