First Word Press site let me know what you think! (3 posts)

  1. jba02b
    Posted 3 years ago #

    Hi there, this is my first web site I have ever built. I Love wordpress. They make it easy building sites!

    This is a site about how to become an electrician.

    View it How To Become An Electrician / Electrician Salary

  2. sophiejs
    Posted 3 years ago #

    This copy seems really dodgy like you're trying to cram as many instances of the word 'electrician' in as possible. That's old-school dodgy SEO and I don't think google is impressed by that anymore. I don't think it was written by a native english speaker, phrases like 'the Electrician Salary' aren't used by native speakers. Also the first para of copy is just waffling and will turn people off straight away. 'Electrical pages' (with a typo) is just weird. I really recommend you get someone with better digital copy skills because this copy is not an asset and is far too long.

    There's some odd wrapping of text on the homepage, the text wraps round empty space. Also I think there's far too much copy on the homepage. The different types of electrician could be on a different page to prevent so much scrolling.

  3. jba02b
    Posted 3 years ago #

    I totally agree with you. I am glad I posted in here. I am going to make the changes you suggested. Thanks for your input!

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