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  • vavroom

    (@vavroom)

    First, your site doesn’t validate. You may say “who cares?” and that would be your perfect right 🙂 However, a validating site has more chance to load quickly and be properly rendered on most browsers. One common error is that you are using <br> but your DTD declares your site as XHTML transitional. You should be using <br />. You also have a few unclosed divs.

    Your ads by google appear to also be playing havock with your validation.

    You need more content. The site is bare 🙁

    The overall feel right now is just that, a bit bare. I often tell people their sites are too busy, but this one errs on the opposite end, just a wee bit too simple. in fact, as it stands, it appears to be a vehicle for the Google ads more than anything else.

    Sorry to be blunt. I’m sure that when you have more content in there, it’ll feel much better.

    Good luck.

    ladydelaluna

    (@ladydelaluna)

    Hmm…
    Very plain, and not really very “manly” (for lack of a better word)…

    Content will be a big thing, as you develop over time… but if the site’s look isn’t interesting enough, no one’s going to read your content.

    chaaban

    (@chaaban)

    Thank’s all for your comments 🙂

    as i mentioned (no content –> site just launched)

    and i just fixed all errors , so the site is now valid 🙂

    http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.bodyguard-training.org%2F&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=Inline

    what do you suggest to make the site look better ?

    ladydelaluna

    (@ladydelaluna)

    I’m not sure – I don’t think I’d be going with a fluid width though, not for this. I’d make the width like, 750 or something.

    I’d also use a lot more black, and maybe some red/orangey stuff. Flames, rebar, I dunno… Just make it more masculine… More “tough guy” – right now, it looks like a fan site for the dude on the right… whoever he is.

    tpicompany

    (@tpicompany)

    try “blending” the ads into your site 😀 and keep on putting more content daily, you can try tag and ping, article marketing, unique content works for me 🙂

    yosemite

    (@yosemite)

    Errors
    URI : http://www.bodyguard-training.org/wp-content/themes/bodyguard/style.css
    * Line: 93 Context : input, textarea
    Invalid number : size Property size doesn't exist : 15
    URI : http://www.bodyguard-training.org/print.css
    * Line: -1
    File not foundhttp://www.bodyguard-training.org/print.css: Not Found

    chaaban

    (@chaaban)

    fixed the css errors , thanks again .

    I’ll try 2 add a background image and add more colors and let you know …

    Thanks a lot for all your comments !!

    i really appreciate it !

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