Andrew Nevins
(@anevins)
WCLDN 2018 Contributor | Volunteer support
- The website for me took 17 seconds to load completely
- Large capitalised red sentences will discourage rather than encourage users to register, as it is perceived as shouting/ screaming.
- The ticked bullet points may appear neater if aligned left http://riversailscondo.org/register-interest/
If i was you i would change the background or at least make the background more of a gradient.
Furthermore i would also upload the logo in a higher quality
How did you disable right click?
How did you get the glow in the inpur fields of contact form 7 on Register Interest page.
I think that you should change your favicon: it’s not very clear and it has a lot of pixels.
I don’t know what you’ve done to the logo but it’s blurry.
The “Riversails” text needs to be completely redone, looks cheap.
The logo imho is on the right track but needs a little tweaking to really capture the feeling of a sail or sailboat in particular. I like how simplistic it already is though.
The harsh glow outside your canvas.wrapper needs to be toned down. Alot.
hide your tags at the end of the <body>
I love the images you have in the slider, very well done but please take off the effects or atleast tone them down.
If I were you I would find something to box in the main content below the images, I find it very hard and boring to read. I tried forcing myself to read it and I got to about line 2.
I mean there’s a lot more but honestly I do like where your website is heading.
