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  • As if you need approval to make such excellent designs TINALS 🙂

    Just make sure you keep both available [old and new] they are both too good to put in the cupboard…

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    I’m a little worried it just doesn’t all fit together – and that it might be hard to read. You know how it is when you stare at a screen for too long – sometimes you just need some input.

    Welll, you don’t need to worry. It is excellent. Really. My only criticism [if you can call it that] is that perhaps the menu could do with a bit of graphic input. Not much though – just enough to ‘balance’ the site really.

    My suggestions …

    Since you are already going for a heavy gothic theme (and that’s gothic as in history):

    * The overall typo does not reflect the atmosphere that you start with the header. I would suggest a serif font like Georgia or Times.

    * Overall I find the basic text width and font size not in proportion. Either make the width smaller – so your readers eyes can easier swing from the end of one line to next beginning – or simply crank the font size up.

    * The headlines (or it’s fonts) are to small IMHO

    * The content ‘frame’ is to delicate, it needs to be bigger to correspond to the proportions of the header. Maybe also the inner edges could be rougher – not just a straight line …

    * … and I am sure your right side nav will be more goth as well …

    😉

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    How’s it looking now?

    Very nice! Your ‘previous posts’ link seems to be showing up in the middle of the page rather than at the bottom.

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    Yeah I notcied that as well, It seems to be a bug with Mallow

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    Does anyone know what to tweak in the CSS to make the lines of writing a little farther apart?

    Looks great, I don’t exactly know what you mean further apart but I am guessing just some space between the lines?

    line-height: 1.5em;

    should do the trick

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    cheers!

    You can also do line heights in percentages:

    line-height: 150%;

    Just saw the image under the Gardiner.. I was born in Toronto and thought it looked familiar… cool site…

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