In my opinion the structure is clear and straighforward, the colors are professional, the contact is very accessible and the social integration is spot on.
The only two main drawbacks are the typography and design of the slides from the slideshow and the length of the text lines in general. Have you tried to design in two columns instead? People don’t read lines of text that long, it just seems too much to read even if it isn’t. And on the other hand, short paragraphs look poorer if they are only two lines long.
I hope it helps!
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Locix
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Thank you for the feedback, I did consider doing 2/3 Page with some widgets on the right hand side using the other 1/3 but didn’t really know what sort of information I could put in those widgets without repeating my self…
I don’t quite get what u mean in regards to the design of the slides tho? can you elaborate on that please 🙂
Thanks
Mmmm yes, of course.
In general, let it breathe. The page breathes but the slides seem to be overloaded. Perhaps the size of the logos… they don’t need to cover the entire white space to be recognized. Same applies for the social networks slides and the last one with the three services. In fact, take a look at how they are actually touching the top edge but there is a lot of space underneath. Try centering them vertically.
And also typography. I think it is difficult to read. For a techie effect I would go for a simple monospaced one or the never wrong Eurostile perhaps. And, most importantly, keep is consistent. Use a group of two through out the slides.
I hope it helped! 😉
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Locix
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Hi, Thanks for the feedback, what your saying does make perfect sense, i will be addressing these issues asap
Thanks Again 🙂
I agree that it looks a little cluttered, I think a bit of whitespace between the bottom of the slider and the start of the text would probably help a lot – also the first slide (with all the logos) is really busy and could do with some space in it.
