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Please review my site (11 posts)

  1. aleies
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    so i'm just posting it so i can get the gist and such.
    i've had it for a few, but i'm trying to get it exact now, getting ready for winter.

    http://www.aleies.com/landscape/

    well i know i kept it simple.
    i'm still working a few things out, like
    i need to change the text that is "leave a comment"
    as i'm doing away with that. not quite sure how to yet. as it's not in the comment.php, (possibly something on the server so i hear but have yet to locate.)
    i don't use this as a marketing thing so much, as a side line to the main website, although i'm in search for a way to sell things, on the "merchant's lick" page, but i have yet to find a simple solution,
    i'd like to have something that will simply show a picture, possible description, and add to cart box. then i'd like the cart to be a subpage so that it goes unseen on the home, or maybe a sidebar thing on the same page would do better.
    mostly i'd like no clutter. but i have yet to understand exactly integration is accomplished.
    well,yes
    thank you.

  2. Andrew
    Forum Moderator
    Posted 10 months ago #

    Are you looking for us to review your site?

  3. aleies
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    yes i guess, i am,

  4. I've changed your topic title to something useful.

    http://codex.wordpress.org/Forum_Welcome#Choose_A_Good_Topic_Title

    Try and pick better titles for your topic ok? ;)

  5. elm108
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    There's not much content to discern how it all fits together so it's a bit hard to review. Ok scratch that...

    I thought there wasn't much content, but then I realized the content was not just other folks comments as I had initially read the poems? to be. Based on my use of the site, I would suggest doing something to make the content read as content instead of comments. Right now everything kind of runs together...I thought I was reading one post whereas in actuality it was a series of posts.

    Also the navigation is a little awkward... in the sense it took me a few moments to figure out how to get back to the main landscape page.

    In general I'm a little confused about what the site is about...it seems cryptic (and I was a fine arts major!) Like what does "fingertip touch." that appears at the top of every page even mean?

    My overall feeling is one of perplexity, if that was your goal, well done.

  6. liton1980
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    The width of your theme is too low and however maybe you need a small width theme, but your website seems empty now. I suggest you to choose another theme and also a bigger font.

  7. aleies
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    sorry about my title, jan, i'll make sure to keep this in mind.

    thank you elm, very much,

  8. aleies
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    yeah it's a bit cryptic, but people who keep up will figure it out.
    thank you liton1980, i'll researched, and the creator is going to make a version that is wider and larger font, but it will be pretty much the same. i'm trying to keep it content driven, and bare. it's writing and pictures, so the idea is keeping it hyper focused on that, which i think the theme accomplishes. thank you!

  9. dice2dice
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    There very little to review.I haven't a clue of what it is or what it is meant to be.

    There is no About section and this is essential for all sites. That's why you always find one on successful sites from small hairdresser websites to Bank of Scotland or any big company.

    The About us can feature your vision or ambition for the site.

    Good luck but much still to do.

  10. SumoCoupon
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    It's nice and clean/minimalist and I like that, but it doesn't do a good job of getting any point across. What's the site about even? Just quotes?

  11. blograzzi
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    Nice theme. It is fast also. Is there any widget are at the theme?

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