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The Scottish Rave Scene 1990's (6 posts)

  1. marcspark
    Member
    Posted 1 year ago #

    Freelance video crew begins to digitize their archive collection of video footage from Scotland's rave scene in the 1990's http://www.doublevisionscotland.com

  2. Jessica J. Johnston
    Member
    Posted 1 year ago #

    Looks cool. The body text is really hard to read though. I'd suggest a different font and more line-height spacing. Setting up a menu would help with the organization of the overall site and usability greatly. Make sure to give the site a Title that will show up in the Title Bar space for SEO purposes, among other things. There's a LOT of text on the homepage - I'd say splitting this content up into sections would be a big improvement.

    Good luck.

  3. design_myspace
    Member
    Posted 1 year ago #

    I really like your background, its amazing.

  4. shaunbaldwin
    Member
    Posted 1 year ago #

    First of all, what a brilliant topic and great footage.
    I have to agree with Jessica, the body copy is difficult to read and the page feels a little cluttered.

    Coming from a design background I always try to keep my text wherever possible to black text on white backgrounds. There is quite alot going on in the back ground with the video so simplifying the text, possibly also using a lighter weight font might help.

    Best of luck

  5. marcspark
    Member
    Posted 4 months ago #

    thanks for the feedback everyone, still working away at it and will take all comments onboard, cheers :)

  6. marcspark
    Member
    Posted 2 months ago #

    After months of trying to edit the theme to my liking i opted to switch over to Twenty Fourteen, thanks for your feedback i will implement it :)

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