Seems pretty good to me!!
Sweet. Looks like a website.
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Just a few issues/suggestions:
- Create a tagline that actually explains what you do. “Virtual Solutions for Today’s Business Challenges” has a slight odeur of hot air (and not much else.) The tagline text is hard to read – dark on dark and jagged. Perhaps better to have actual text at the top, with the image as background – that way you’re giving the search engines something to work on, too.
- The top image is quite large, and placing the menu above it can cause people miss the menu, either because they scroll down or because it looks similar to and ad-bar (like blogspot’s – or is it Blogger.com’s?). You also placed the same menu at the left. No need for redundancy – just delete the upper menu.
- When people see underlined text, they automaticcaly assume they can click on it. Therefore, don’t underline text that isn’t a link. There are many more ways of differentiating text.
- What do I subscribe to, when I enter my e-mail address in the subscribe field? How often will I get e-mail? Will you sell my e-mail to third-parties? etc. etc.
- What’s the difference between “About Terry” and “Meet Terry”? And who IS Terry? There is no picture of Terry :-).
Just a few thoughts. Hop you can use them.
-Claus
