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My new website needs feedback (7 posts)

  1. iwasfirst
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    Hi!

    I would very much appreciate any kind of feedback on my newly launched website http://www.andregiaever.com/en!

    I'm a highly dedicated WordPress enthusiast who wants to present this CMS in the best way possible through my work as project manager and web developer.

    Hopefully, many of you will respond! :)

    All the best!
    André

  2. Tyler
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    Good stuff! Nice and clean/clear, I'd add in more content to your blog and also a home link for your users. Like the multi language function. I'd also introduce more images, graphics or color to the site.

  3. jacobmarley
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    I like the theme design. Spelling and grammar needs to be checked.
    For example, the second line of the home page is :

    I’m a socially motivated og environmentally focused web astronaut with skills and exerience in the areas of…

    There are 2 spelling errors "og" and "exerience"

    There are other grammatical errors throughout the content.

    Here's an example of a grammar issue:

    Here is an overview of what I’ve I’m trying to accomplish with this site:

    Hope this helps.

    JM

  4. iwasfirst
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    Thank you so much for your feedback so far, and I'll be sure to clean up the grammatical errors.;)

    I'll obviously be adding more content in terms of blog post, pages and pictures as time goes by. The website is about three weeks old, so just an infant.

    Revisit the site in a while to see the progress.

    Cheers!:)

  5. blograzzi
    Member
    Posted 9 months ago #

    I could not know to use a sign for logo. Maybe you need to create a logo for your project.

  6. webene
    Member
    Posted 9 months ago #

    watch out for the spelling errors :)

  7. newvisionmedia
    Member
    Posted 9 months ago #

    Initial impression was I liked the clean design and use of white space. I did feel it needed some colour though above the fold.
    Since your opening statement is an introduction to yourself I felt I would like to see an image relating to you - if not a portrait picture of you personally then something that gives an impression of your personality. I believe very strongly that 'people buy from people' and so making this initial connection may help?
    I also notice the load time of your page was very slow. I did a refresh and received a server error so that may be a glitch on the server. I cleared my cache and compared load times between your site and my video production website - yours took well over 10 seconds to load.
    Hope that helps.

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