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  • home-remedy

    (@home-remedy)

    Your site is not loading… not sure if it is a problem at my end, all other sites are opening pretty much nicely though…

    will check back on this again, in the mean time, if it is really down, try to get it fixed,
    cheers,

    Thread Starter enucos

    (@enucos)

    Thanks for your reply home-remedy, but you got me stuck. I try the link after posting it and worked on my computer, I try it again now and work again. Is it possible that my website is restricted to some people? Can you tell me from what country are you trying to load it and what browser did you used?

    home-remedy

    (@home-remedy)

    It is opening now, not sure what was causing the problem earlier.

    Anyway, just went through your blog now and found the following things where you can work on:

    1) Your link structure is not friendly, you are still using the default link structure. Go to, settings-permalinks under your wordpress admin panel and select a more friendly permalinks structure.

    2) You are using the default theme, it is pretty much simple, but in the long run perhaps a premium or a custom theme will be a better idea. For the moment though, a bit of customizations like adding a logo and a header will help make your brand.

    3) I also find that you have added some ads, but banner ads and sidebar ads do not really convert well. Try putting a large rectangle of text ads, blended, into the article, and covered by text on all three sides.

    4) Use social media – those static share buttons that you have put in the article body is kind of old idea. Try using the call-to-action type, social voting buttons for more exposure and shares.

    Overall, your blog is good and have some decent content,
    keep it updated,
    cheers,

    Thread Starter enucos

    (@enucos)

    Thank you for your constructive replay, I’m not sure how to do all those thinks, but sure I will try. 🙂

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