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Honest Insight of my Site! (2 posts)

  1. ScantronMinds
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    I have worked really hard on my sites, they were based on an original theme set but have been modified greatly. Basically, given my product types, I would appreciate your honest opinion of initial impression, overall feeling, does it work with my products and do you think it feels credible. I am BIG on details and the hours and hours I have placed into my sites I think they are pretty sharp...but of course, what else would I say right?

    So here are my two sites: BTW, if you want a decal, custom or otherwise, just contact me or use the code "gostickit" lowercase, without quotes at checkout on the http://www.gostickit.biz site.

  2. jacobmarley
    Member
    Posted 10 months ago #

    Hi,

    Like you product. Slow the slider down (most people can't read that fast and some do not like sliders).

    In your product list, when you hover is generally says "view all posts filed under)

    Under "Application" I saw a couple things

    Under "application" change "have got" to "have". Also, second paragraph should be 2 sentences.

    "What you will get or have gotten" can be changed to "What you will get"

    I would eliminate "it's own" throughout or change it to "its own"
    Its is the possessive form of it.
    It's is a contraction of it is or it has.

    Hope this helps.

    JM

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