Feedback: Personal Training Business Page

  • slowrunnersexcursion

    (@slowrunnersexcursion)


    9 years, 9 months ago

    Hello,

    I have recently started a personal training business and I would love feedback. It is too basic and I would like to get more out of it. I am mostly asking as I think this will be a better way for me to become more familiar with coding and website developing.

    I have images up currently on the homepage of clients. I am currently in the process of getting better images.

    My logo was just finished as of last night and I would like the theme of the website to relate.

    All criticism is welcome. Thank you in advance.

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  • Michael

    (@alchymyth)

    9 years, 9 months ago

    please provide a live link to your site to make commenting easier 🙂

    Thread Starter slowrunnersexcursion

    (@slowrunnersexcursion)

    9 years, 9 months ago

    My apologies: http://www.reedswellnessandfitnesstraining.com

    Thank you, alchymyth 🙂

    Thread Starter slowrunnersexcursion

    (@slowrunnersexcursion)

    9 years, 9 months ago

    I have updated the page.

    MCloney

    (@mcloney)

    9 years, 9 months ago

    Hi there!

    First off, I like your logo and your colors! 🙂 It is a little tough, though, to read the white text on the black background. Have you considered maybe having the black background just in the Header area? I also found the bright blue link color quite difficult to read. Is that the default link color?

    Secondly, re: the text on the Personal Training page — you might want to try “chunking” it up a bit more. White space and bulleted lists help readers skim the text, and also provides more visual appeal. Header tags can help with that, as well as improve SEO for your site!

    Don’t forget to test how the site looks on mobile throughout your design phase. Right now, the home page text goes a little wonky when the screen is reduced down to iPhone-size.

    Finally, I know you said you’re still working on photos. Something to keep in mind –you may want to crop the photos to be less vertical. As they are now, the “meat” of the photos falls below the fold, if you’re familiar with that term. To keep viewers’ attention, you don’t want them to have to scroll down to see the full photos.

    I hope that’s helpful! Good luck and have fun. 🙂

    Thread Starter slowrunnersexcursion

    (@slowrunnersexcursion)

    9 years, 9 months ago

    I made some changes to the website with use of some of your feedback.

    Do you have any tips regarding mobile? Thanks in advance.

    http://www.reedswellnessandfitnesstraining.com

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