Alright, have at it

  • jgk1013

    (@jgk1013)


    17 years, 4 months ago

    I’m a little nervous but I’m submitting my site for your thoughts. It can be found at http://www.citizenjake.com. Any and all criticisms (constructive I hope) welcome. And yes I know the library page for Now Reading isn’t working (anyone want to help with that one? ) Have at me.

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  • Dgold

    (@dgold)

    17 years, 4 months ago

    I hadn’t seen that WP Movie Reviews plugin (and the Book reviews that is linked to it). That’s a good feature for what looks like a pretty much personal blog.

    olivers

    (@olivers)

    17 years, 4 months ago

    Nicely done! However, I’d probably try to relocate the google ads, since now they’re building a huge block. A more subtle presentation would be good IMHO.

    Oliver
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    elainevigneault

    (@elainevigneault)

    17 years, 4 months ago

    I went straight for that WP Movie plugin, too. Is niiiiice!

    So, I like your blog, you just need to actually blog! More writing, more content! more!

    oh, and 🙂 heh
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    Bodhipaksa

    (@haecceity)

    17 years, 4 months ago

    Welcome to blogging!

    Some of your text is in unbloken blocks about half a mile long, which makes it daunting to read. Even on the written page my eyes need paragraph breaks so that I can pause for a moment, and on the web paragraphs need to be even shorter because it’s more demanding to read on a monitor. So feel free to use that “enter” key in a liberal manner!

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