Help Critique My Blog

  • jacobswenson

    (@jacobswenson)


    9 years, 7 months ago

    3 Things I would like to be reviewed.

    1. Layout of the website (Pictures, Tag Line, ect.)
    2. About page
    3. Blog post (font size, spacing, any additions, ect.)

    I really appreciate all of your feedback. If you have any suggestions feel free to let me know.

    http://www.lifewithlowly.com
    Thanks

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  • sunrader

    (@sunrader)

    9 years, 7 months ago

    The layout is attractive. I am only looking at it on a PC. My immediate thought was whether this would work on mobiles.

    The about page, well, honestly, for me it was very off-putting. It seems very arrogant. I’ve been to Nepal. They should not be equated with ants. No one should in this context. To write so arrogantly while making many writing errors does not speak well for the blog.

    I like the font/spacing/etc. The widget text is a bit too small, but otherwise, I think the site looks good.

    Moderator Jan Dembowski

    (@jdembowski)

    Forum Moderator and Brute Squad

    9 years, 7 months ago

    @jacobswenson Please stop creating duplicate topics that mirror this one.

    Thread Starter jacobswenson

    (@jacobswenson)

    9 years, 7 months ago

    sunrader-Can you take a look again and let me know what you think. I did some editing. Thanks

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